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21 May 2010
- 03:5903:59, 21 May 2010 diff hist −17 Lunar space elevator →Fabrication: Newtons "convert" to mass only in the context of a 1g environment, which isn't the case here. They do convert to pounds though, which is also a unit of force.
- 03:3903:39, 21 May 2010 diff hist −26 Lunar space elevator →Fabrication: Non-need for equatorial anchor applies to Earth too, gravity has little to do with it. Eq. anchors on Earth are lower-risk and simpler, but nothing makes off-eq. anchors impossible.
- 02:2302:23, 21 May 2010 diff hist −1 Jim Breuer →Television career: "ill-fated" -> "short-lived" (more better :-) ), fixed up accidental italics
- 01:4001:40, 21 May 2010 diff hist 0 Talk:John Birch Society →"Far-Right": minor typo
- 01:3801:38, 21 May 2010 diff hist +760 Talk:John Birch Society →"Far-Right": The more dry and boring, the better....... :-) . Tag: repeating characters
- 01:2401:24, 21 May 2010 diff hist −4 John Birch Society "Radical" has non-neutral name-calling taint. Ref2 doesn't say it (they say "far"). WP redirects "radical rw" to "far rw", which is what they call it. "Far" is straightforward & descriptive. Neutral.
- 01:1301:13, 21 May 2010 diff hist −48 John Birch Society →Position on American political spectrum: Removed sect. title. Summing up para. in that way seemed "off". Straightforward stating of the content seemed more neutral.
- 01:0601:06, 21 May 2010 diff hist −53 John Birch Society →Position on American political spectrum: Toned down the implication here that they were a hate group. The parenthetical comment is unnecessary anyway as the link can provide side-information.
20 May 2010
- 19:2719:27, 20 May 2010 diff hist −19 LET L-23 Super Blaník made a little better encyclopedic tone
- 19:1119:11, 20 May 2010 diff hist +1,134 Talk:T-tail →Difficulty of spin recovery?: I think its a few things muddled together that makes the apparent inconsistency.
19 May 2010
- 16:3816:38, 19 May 2010 diff hist −9 Caps Lock →Shift lock: A little more encyclopedia grammar
- 16:3716:37, 19 May 2010 diff hist −42 Caps Lock →Cultural significance: No need to plug one company's product in particular when talking about an attribute that many have. (Non-neutral)
- 04:1504:15, 19 May 2010 diff hist −70 Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat Somebody slipped a mention of their high school. If it was named best, it's off-topic anyway. Deleted.
- 04:1204:12, 19 May 2010 diff hist −82 Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat more fixups, less unencyclopedic style
- 03:5903:59, 19 May 2010 diff hist 0 Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat same
- 03:5803:58, 19 May 2010 diff hist +1 Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat fixed grammar
- 03:2903:29, 19 May 2010 diff hist +3 Hooters →Hooters Girls: It's not a "euphemism" which is a nicer way of referring to something. In fact, "hooters" is a less-nice way of referencing! :-) "Slang" is more accurate.
18 May 2010
- 03:5703:57, 18 May 2010 diff hist −149 Radio Inside →Plot Summary: This is a wild extrapolation of one off-hand remark in the film. Non-neutral POV, Original Research, Opinion, Proselytizing.
- 02:2302:23, 18 May 2010 diff hist +6 Radio Inside →Plot Summary: Pronouns were confusing close to indeterminate. Also, usage of "we" and "us" and "him" implied a non-neutral, proselytizing POV.
- 02:1902:19, 18 May 2010 diff hist +135 User talk:108.7.8.102 Nope
17 May 2010
- 04:5104:51, 17 May 2010 diff hist −40 Rubbing alcohol Flammability IN water is not credible, and the cited reference didn't actually say it. Some things burn in water, but not isopropanol. If I'm mistaken, find a a citation please for it.