User contributions for 108.28.105.194

18 June 2015

• 03:3503:35, 18 June 2015 diff hist −36‎ War Admiral ‎ →‎In popular culture: minor re-write.
• 03:3203:32, 18 June 2015 diff hist +2‎ War Admiral ‎ CK rode WA twice at Sar, in July'38. see DRF past perfs.

16 June 2015

• 04:1904:19, 16 June 2015 diff hist +1‎ National Geographic Society ‎ →‎Overview: minor.
• 02:0202:02, 16 June 2015 diff hist −5‎ Don Ameche ‎ minor edit.

13 June 2015

• 01:2801:28, 13 June 2015 diff hist +4‎ Leodegar ‎ add break for alignment.

12 June 2015

• 18:0518:05, 12 June 2015 diff hist +2‎ Charles Kurtsinger ‎ minor.
• 06:1206:12, 12 June 2015 diff hist +10‎ War Admiral ‎ →‎In popular culture: more accurate title.
• 06:0706:07, 12 June 2015 diff hist +12‎ War Admiral ‎ minor changes.
• 05:5705:57, 12 June 2015 diff hist +30‎ War Admiral ‎ →‎References: separate section for EL.
• 04:5704:57, 12 June 2015 diff hist +5‎ George Woolf ‎ minor.
• 04:2704:27, 12 June 2015 diff hist +12‎ Louis of Toulouse ‎ minor changes.
• 04:2704:27, 12 June 2015 diff hist −16‎ James of Majorca (monk) ‎ our article is named Louis of Toulouse.
• 03:4603:46, 12 June 2015 diff hist +7‎ Cimarron (1931 film) ‎ →‎Plot: minor re-write, add italics.
• 03:3803:38, 12 June 2015 diff hist −21‎ Cimarron (1931 film) ‎ omit needless words.
• 03:2903:29, 12 June 2015 diff hist −3‎ Cimarron (novel) ‎ →‎Films: minor.
• 00:5200:52, 12 June 2015 diff hist +5‎ George Woolf ‎ his death resulted from his fall, as I understand it.
• 00:4000:40, 12 June 2015 diff hist +20‎ George Woolf ‎ common name is preferred.

11 June 2015

• 20:4120:41, 11 June 2015 diff hist +429‎ Agawam, Massachusetts ‎ →‎History: start sorting out airport, racetrack refs.
• 18:2718:27, 11 June 2015 diff hist +97‎ Rockingham Park ‎ use of "ibid" is discouraged by MoS.

8 June 2015

• 23:1423:14, 8 June 2015 diff hist −7‎ The Breaking Point (1950 film) ‎ he owns his boat, so he is not "penniless".
• 15:3115:31, 8 June 2015 diff hist +2‎ Robert Hugh Benson ‎ the RCC is not a club that one "joins".

7 June 2015

• 20:2820:28, 7 June 2015 diff hist +26‎ Horst Wessel ‎ →‎Memorial namings: italics for Eagle.

6 June 2015

• 21:0621:06, 6 June 2015 diff hist +7‎ Helena, mother of Constantine I ‎ remove ambiguity.

4 June 2015

• 03:5203:52, 4 June 2015 diff hist −7‎ The Wilderness ‎ →‎Other uses: put first and re-arrange.

3 June 2015

• 15:4415:44, 3 June 2015 diff hist −7‎ Point Lookout Light ‎ re-work lead sentence, caps for service branches (American usage).
• 03:0503:05, 3 June 2015 diff hist +8‎ Point Lookout Light ‎ the lighthouse isn't in the town.

2 June 2015

• 20:3620:36, 2 June 2015 diff hist −2‎ Lordsburg killings ‎ supersized quote-marks are not necessary.
• 02:2602:26, 2 June 2015 diff hist +1‎ Province of Maryland ‎ space, the final frontier.

1 June 2015

• 23:2723:27, 1 June 2015 diff hist +1‎ Nobutaka Machimura ‎ some of us can't find our ess with both hands.
• 02:4202:42, 1 June 2015 diff hist +4‎ Joachim Wtewael ‎ title in italics.
• 01:5401:54, 1 June 2015 diff hist +8‎ Horst Wessel ‎ doesn't this make more sense? who would confuse "Eagle" with "Horst Wessel"?

30 May 2015

• 18:2518:25, 30 May 2015 diff hist +1‎ Patrick Francis Healy ‎ →‎Biography: fix spelling of link in ref.
• 18:2018:20, 30 May 2015 diff hist 0‎ Patrick Francis Healy ‎ →‎Children of the Healy family: minor.
• 17:4417:44, 30 May 2015 diff hist −1‎ Georgetown University ‎ →‎Main campus: minor.
• 01:0201:02, 30 May 2015 diff hist −79‎ 1998 Japanese Grand Prix ‎ →‎Practice and qualifying: shorten caption.
• 00:5900:59, 30 May 2015 diff hist −6‎ 1998 Japanese Grand Prix ‎ →‎Race: re-write photo caption.
• 00:5200:52, 30 May 2015 diff hist −27‎ 1998 Japanese Grand Prix ‎ →‎Background: copy-edit to omit needless words.
• 00:2000:20, 30 May 2015 diff hist +68‎ 1999 Malaysian Grand Prix ‎ folks are more interested in the race during which he broke his leg, more than the circuit itself.
• 00:0300:03, 30 May 2015 diff hist −21‎ 2006 Brazilian Grand Prix ‎ →‎Safety car and restart: copy-edits.

29 May 2015

• 23:4723:47, 29 May 2015 diff hist −10‎ 2006 Brazilian Grand Prix ‎ →‎Safety car and restart: copy-edits.
• 23:2423:24, 29 May 2015 diff hist +4‎ 2006 Brazilian Grand Prix ‎ →‎Safety car and restart: "put paid to" is a little too informal, I think, but we can still have fun!
• 23:1223:12, 29 May 2015 diff hist +2‎ 2006 Brazilian Grand Prix ‎ →‎Start: copy-edit.
• 02:0102:01, 29 May 2015 diff hist −4‎ Michael Schumacher ‎ →‎Personal life: undo redlink in ref.
• 01:5301:53, 29 May 2015 diff hist 0‎ Nico Rosberg ‎ →‎GP2 (2005): minor.
• 01:0401:04, 29 May 2015 diff hist −14‎ Michael Schumacher ‎ →‎2013 skiing accident: fix date in ref.
• 00:4100:41, 29 May 2015 diff hist −23‎ Michael Schumacher ‎ →‎1996–1999: minor re-write -- omit needless words.

27 May 2015

• 22:4422:44, 27 May 2015 diff hist 0‎ 2015 Spanish Grand Prix ‎ italics for newspapers.
• 22:3722:37, 27 May 2015 diff hist −37‎ 2015 Spanish Grand Prix ‎ mostly verb tenses.
• 21:5221:52, 27 May 2015 diff hist +1‎ 2012 Brazilian Grand Prix ‎ →‎Post-race: sp.
• 20:3220:32, 27 May 2015 diff hist −26‎ 2000 Monaco Grand Prix ‎ →‎Race: copy-edit.