Hello, I’d like to improve the Draft
article. I want to acknowledge that I have a connection to the company, so I’m avoiding direct editing and instead seeking guidance on how to make the page neutral and meet Wikipedia standards. Vivekjain9024 (talk) 13:40, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Could someone provide specific feedback on the issues that need to be addressed to make this page ready for the main space? I understand that the page was moved due to concerns about neutrality and possible COI, and I would like to correct any problems.
I have tried to add independent and reliable sources, but I would appreciate feedback on whether the sources cited are appropriate, or if more or better sources are required. I am also working to ensure the article is written in a neutral tone. If any parts of the draft still sound promotional, could you point them out so I can revise them?
Once I address the issues, would it be possible for someone to review the article and provide guidance on whether it's ready to be submitted again for main space? I want to ensure the article meets all guidelines.
I’m working on improving the Draft:Celoxis page, and I’m seeking guidance on how to make it ready for mainspace. I was inspired by the Triskell page, which covers a similar topic. My goal is to structure and present the Celoxis article similarly, ensuring it meets Wikipedia’s notability and neutrality standards.
I understand that there may be a potential conflict of interest as I am associated with the company. For this reason, I am not directly editing the article and would like help from neutral editors to make sure everything is compliant.
Could someone kindly review the draft and provide feedback on:
- Whether the structure and tone of the article match Wikipedia’s neutrality standards (similar to the Triskell page).
- Suggestions on improving the content, if needed.
- Whether the sources provided are appropriate and meet Wikipedia’s criteria for reliability.
Your assistance would be greatly appreciated in helping make this article live. Thank you for your time and guidance!
