Draft:Ahtisham Aslam

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Ahtisham Aslam is a field hockey player representing Pakistan in FIH tournaments.^[1]^[2] He was born to the family of Muhammad Aslam on the 12th of January 2002 in Wah Cantt near Islamabad, Pakistan. Ahtisham represented Pakistan at Asian Hockey 5s Worldcup Qualifier as a defender.^[3]

Ahtisham represented Pakistan as a field hockey player in several hockey events such as 2022 Men's FIH Hockey5s^[4], Sultan Azlan Shah Cup, FIH Nation Cup, Junior Asia Cup, Asian Champion Trophy, Men's Hockey 5s Asia Cup Salalah, Asian Games 2023, and Sultan Johor Cup. ^[5] ^[6]

References[edit]

^ "ASLAM Ahtisham | Pakistan hockey player". International Hockey Federation. Retrieved 2024-02-03.
^ Agencies (2023-12-15). "Junior Hockey World Cup: Pakistan go down to Australia in high-scoring clash". DAWN.COM. Retrieved 2024-05-27.
^ PTI (2023-08-30). "India Thrashes Oman 12-2, Narrowly Loses to Pakistan 4-5 In Asian Hockey 5s World Cup Qualifier". news.abplive.com. Retrieved 2024-02-03.
^ "International Hockey Federation". tms.fih.ch. Retrieved 2024-02-03.
^ Raja, AHMD (2023-12-14). "FIH Hockey Men's Junior WC: Pakistan go down fighting against Australia 9". Retrieved 2024-05-27.
^ "Pakistani Junior hockey stars joined the #WhiteCard Campaign and shared special messages to celebrate the day". Asian Hockey Federation. Retrieved 2024-05-27.

[1] "ASLAM Ahtisham | Pakistan hockey player". International Hockey Federation. Retrieved 2024-02-03.

[2] Agencies (2023-12-15). "Junior Hockey World Cup: Pakistan go down to Australia in high-scoring clash". DAWN.COM. Retrieved 2024-05-27.

[3] PTI (2023-08-30). "India Thrashes Oman 12-2, Narrowly Loses to Pakistan 4-5 In Asian Hockey 5s World Cup Qualifier". news.abplive.com. Retrieved 2024-02-03.

[4] "International Hockey Federation". tms.fih.ch. Retrieved 2024-02-03.

[5] Raja, AHMD (2023-12-14). "FIH Hockey Men's Junior WC: Pakistan go down fighting against Australia 9". Retrieved 2024-05-27.

[6] "Pakistani Junior hockey stars joined the #WhiteCard Campaign and shared special messages to celebrate the day". Asian Hockey Federation. Retrieved 2024-05-27.

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